Monday, March 17, 2008

Beautiful Lie Comments

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Is this all just a game to you
Some funny little deed
A beautiful lie
One thats breaking me
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Janelle Morehart
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William Jackson 27 April 2008

Great juxtaposition in the title. This poem expresses a great theme, the harm of game playing in relationships. No wonder so many people are unable to trust and are suspicious when their significant others say the three words they only wish were being said with total abandonment and complete honesty. The beautiful lie is promulgated so often that cynicism over shadows all.

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Ashley LeBlanc 19 March 2008

This is such a beautiful poem! ! I enjoyed it

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