Beautiful Letdown Comments

You can feel the honesty, and this I love.

Wow...this was a very emotional poem. I really like this one too. Such strong feelings, but in a good way. Great poem

what did the love lack as a result of the sands of time? what was the token she gave back? The feeling and intensity is good.

This is a new theme; I like it. It's simple, but very sincere. My heart goes out to you.