Dew electrocutes the grass
Not a day it forgets
Water shatters like pieces of glass
Slowly flowing into sunset.
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hey you are really a good poetess...and the following stanza of your poem is really very ricLightening scratches the air Spraining clouds with its lies Its thunder freezes as it stares Slowly flowing into sunrise. h... liked it very much
You've got a beautiful piece there!