Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Beautiful Injury Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dew electrocutes the grass
Not a day it forgets
Water shatters like pieces of glass
Slowly flowing into sunset.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Stewart Gideon 13 October 2009

You've got a beautiful piece there!

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Rafique Farooqi 03 September 2009

Beautiful imagery.......nice painting

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Beautiful is the poem, excellent are the last lines! 10++

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2009

hey you are really a good poetess...and the following stanza of your poem is really very ricLightening scratches the air Spraining clouds with its lies Its thunder freezes as it stares Slowly flowing into sunrise. h... liked it very much

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Simran Sanganeria 10 April 2009

your poems have beautiful meanings and r so touching....

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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