Monday, September 10, 2007

Beautiful Indeed Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once to a garden, very large,
A gardener was made in charge,
Roses, he thought he would plant there,
Of varieties rich and rare,
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shreya koppaka
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Allemagne Roßmann 23 January 2010

Its a very good poetic application indeed.Do read some of mine if you have spare time.Cheers.Ray.

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2009

sherya...its a beautiful poem The roses were bought for different reasons, Like greeting people for the change of seasons, A rose, was bought by a rich maid, For a vase near her bed in which she laid, and the end is masterful i enjoyed reading it....its deeep and reflective very well done cheers

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Ted M 29 June 2009

beautifully written. You have a great imagination and can paint a nice picture with your words. keep up the good work 10+++

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