Saturday, November 9, 2013

Beautiful In White Comments

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Her hairs falls perfectly like a cascade.
You want to touch them for the rest of your
life.
Her sweet sweet eyes will take you to ecstasy.
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Praveen chaudhary
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Ashlee Vandyken 15 November 2013

this is such a sweet poem.

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Praveen Kumar 15 November 2013

yup. and that is what i will have to learn from here. The way a poet give touch to poems

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Payal Parande 14 November 2013

it is very nice write you have written great emotions but try to pin it correctly the words you use are great though...good one

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Praveen Kumar 14 November 2013

i want nobody's but only yours comment because they ignite the something in my heart to be more skilled and to be perfect. thanks for your expensive comment.

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