Her hairs falls perfectly like a cascade.
You want to touch them for the rest of your
life.
Her sweet sweet eyes will take you to ecstasy.
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yup. and that is what i will have to learn from here. The way a poet give touch to poems
it is very nice write you have written great emotions but try to pin it correctly the words you use are great though...good one
i want nobody's but only yours comment because they ignite the something in my heart to be more skilled and to be perfect. thanks for your expensive comment.
this is such a sweet poem.