Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Beautiful Imperfection Comments

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Your lips make up for your crooked eye,
Your touch so sweet, I'm not going to lie.
The connection right there, did you feel it?
Lets make a deal and a kiss to seal it.
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Jade Blaydes
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Guillermo Veloso 27 April 2012

read many of your other offerings...LUV this tight/powerful/plenty of roaming room for the mind! ! ! ! think this is beautiful [path

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David Gerardino 10 April 2012

very good, i see guiter chords in this poem.......

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Connor Whyte 28 March 2012

Again with your power of words you can shake mountains. Keep it up and you will show the world a teenagers perspective. Not many adults see like we see we are more vulnerable and with these words you fit the test. As in test I mean you can make a life lesson you seem what it takes to be a leader you have good words. Short and straight to the point Beautiful work!

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Jade Blaydes

Jade Blaydes

Butte Falls, OR
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