Beautiful Hate Comments

Nice one. It's a game which bounces back love within. Thank you Brittney!

it eat your heart least you think you act different etc. probably works (along with the eccentric spelling in other of the poems) if you are a dialect speaker, but not otherwise. The contradictions also remain and are unresolved. This poetry is like a local wine in France of the sort that tastes well in its own district but does not bottle and travel. Full of homely insight it needs to be read sympathetically.

Beautifully penned. In fact, hate lies at the peak of love. CP

Everything is beautiful, yor poems proves it....I am amazed at the quality of your writing............keep writing....I loved the last three lines the most........

Hate is well expressed, the thing about hate is that it has a way of twisting you to indulge more and more to its poisonous nature. Beautiful.

but don't make laugh it captures your soul it tortures your mind makes you see in way you thought not possible you act different its a good poem written sweet way.. hate is expressed well but I say hate should be hate..because the only friendly smile can let every one in peace as i say in my say ((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq))) any way your poem is good and I liked the way you done..10/10