Beautiful Girl Comments

Very good From English teacher

Very simple poem....

Simple write, though it depicts the joy of love and the heartbreak. Good write.

how i bring myself out of your spell ? ? By repeating the beautiful girl, you are emphasizing something which you understand and want to express in a dear way. thank you. very good poem. liked your simplicity in words and expressions. tony

Beauty can be deceptive...I love the construction of the poem and style of writing... But I just don't understand how and or why someone's beauty can ruin another... The ruin may not be her fault, , , ,

never try for sky but remain on earth wih smell, fragrance and faith

Vain glorification of beauty comes with distress or tragedy in the bliss of love. A nice poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Lovestruck you are...supposed!

Ruined by love, we can all relate to that. Good poem. Thanks

what do you mean actually

wee but cute poem..kp writing...

I loved it! ! It sounds like you really like a girl - tell her if you do! ! :)

Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily!

Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul

Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8.

I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job!

Hmm. So cute the poem is! Lovely.

really cute i must say....................keep on writting

really cute i must...................keep on writting

thanx for the invite.... :) its like a Aesop fable....almost rhymed to nursery style well written tc