Friday, May 8, 2009

Beautiful Eyes Comments

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When you look at me with those beautiful eyes
I just cant help but to smile
Sometimes we can read each other minds
Lets just stop and walk a while
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Marlena Scott
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hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

the last line made the poem whole.. there's no emotion compared to teenage love!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 May 2009

oh what kind of way for inkling love at first sight! ! ! , yet a luscious glow razzles within, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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