Saturday, July 7, 2012

Beautiful Disaster Comments

Rating: 3.5

I poured my heart to you
But you spewed it out
Upon this dried dirt.
I gave you my best
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Christopher Cariad
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Captain Cur 07 July 2012

I liked the title, drew me in, then you used it for a very stong ending. Good write!

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Paducah, Ky USA
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