Thursday, April 14, 2005

Beautiful Death Comments

Rating: 3.8

frost bitten rain drop
watched by crystal eyes
spinning in whirl-winds
dancing across still skies
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Lauren Phillips
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Bkhj Chen 14 April 2005

I like this poem. I think this poem can be viewed as deeper than what I viewed it as, tho. Not sure, this makes the poem good. Mike Chen

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Robert Rorabeck 14 April 2005

what an interesting choice to use numbers for the rhyme at the end of the poem- works well

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Lauren Phillips

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Raleigh, NC
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