Monday, January 28, 2008

Beautiful Death Comments

Rating: 4.0

Vampire
Beautiful Death
Walking alone they feed
Stalking preying on innocents
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Sarah Moore
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Forrest Hainline 04 February 2008

Sarah: I find it interesting that you write often in haiku and cinquain, as I do. This is a well-constructed cinquain, lyrical and imagistic. Forrest Hainline

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