Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Beautiful Dame Comments

Rating: 4.8

Heartbeat of young guys-
You are a dame with beautiful eyes.
Your lips that befool bees,
You drink life to the lees.
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shakil ahmed
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Rajendran Muthiah 10 October 2017

Continuing the feel of love with the departed one in vision is excellent! Fresh theme this is!

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Marilyn Lott 03 November 2015

Beautifully penned about love and loss but always there are the memories. This vision of loveliness coming into your dreams can momentarily sustain. She is looking down with love.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 October 2015

all alone when wind shall be blown you shall be swept away o make the way

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Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2009

very nice and beautiful poem. its the truth of life. you write well, keep on compsing and sharing with all. take care see some of my poems too if you wish.

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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