Monday, July 26, 2010

Beautiful Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.9

In a beautiful butterfly,
Your face comes so true to me.

Through a pretty butterfly
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Rob Lamberton 06 February 2023

Ah, the value of love and friendship; thank you the lessons from the lovely butterfly and your own experiences!

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Anzelyne 30 November 2021

Great poetry as always

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

A wonderful poem! Tenderly presented! !

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Only those who are very near to God can perceive beauty in everything.

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Great poem with awesome dictions. Your description of love is amzing and mind blowing

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Yashim David George 11 March 2021

Wow Anthony, it was a beautiful garden, I stepped into paradise at the end. Thank you. Indeed without God, love is doomed to fail.

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Luz Hanaii 10 March 2021

Such beautiful writing, I gave it five stars.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 February 2021

Beautifully, beautifully sewn! .. Beautiful words, of beautiful thought! .. Definitely 5 Stars! .......++++++++++

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Aufie Zophy 19 February 2021

Agree with the other commenters, turning your heart into a bed of flowers, ... So extremely original and beautiful. I love it very much

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Freni Karaluthara 09 January 2021

Dear Poet Antony, What a beautiful lines. Great imagination. And most loved lines 'Oh if I could only turn my heart into a bed of flowers for you to fly and hide and secretly whisper to me with fluttering wings how you love me. ' thanks for sharing such a wondeful lines..

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Susan Williams 06 January 2021

Oh if I could only turn my heart into a bed of flowers for you to fly and hide and secretly whisper to me with fluttering wings how you love me.------- That is absolutely gorgeous!

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Warm and kind is our friendship so rare like a beautiful butterfly.

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

........merry xmas to all PH POETS

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 December 2020

Great lesson Love is freedom and never possesive

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Shaun Cronick 10 December 2020

Thanks again good Tony and your poems deserve to be revisited and reread. Another five deserved stars and I wish you well. May God Bless and Keep you. Take care.

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Chinedu Dike 29 November 2020

Very powerfully and movingly penned is this beautiful poem of yours. The essence of truly fulfilling love is aptly captured in the piece. A work of an intricate mind.

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Belle Wassermeister 13 October 2020

Very nice poem, Tony. Thank you for inviting me to read it. May God bless you!

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Colin Jeffery 05 September 2020

Superb poem that inspires - - thank you Tony. A poet's heart indeed that is truly gifted.

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Zywa Zywa 02 September 2020

PART 3: Then, this romantic poem gives me the image, that being a garden with the lovely flowers of happy thoughts, there will be times of winter - less flowers, less happiness on the one hand, and forming buds for the next season on the other hand. This could be elaborated in another poem. Romance is delicate, writing a romantic poem is delicate too. Here's a fine result.

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Zywa Zywa 02 September 2020

PART 2: " It takes time and maturity to realize that real love is freedom and never possessive." You recognize this in your own life: " You are mine, I love you. God, help me not to be possessive." These are necessary lines to make the poem meaningful.

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