Monday, September 22, 2008

Beautiful Broken Butterfly Comments

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Butterfly, you flew away
And at first I didn't know
How each hard day was
Straining on you so
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Airda Jones
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Kesav Easwaran 19 February 2009

grieving song of a butterfly that can't fly away...last stanza lines would move the reader mind...good piece, Airda...10

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