A shimmering of your hair
As I glance in awe
A quiver of your lips
As I swallow in anticipation
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Great use of vivid detail and description. Your captured the scene perfectly, painting a beautiful picture of a beautiful woman. That's what makes it memorable for me! Top marks! -Michael
Tastefully sensual, beautifully written of what appears to be a passionate love. Hot! A fortunate wife have you~~~~~~~~~~mm.
Undoubtedly a excellent write. I like your style. Great read. Love Ernestine XXX
Lovely poem David, full of anticipation, a 10 for this, Lynda x
A great love poem if ever I read one. Well penned.