Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Beautiful Beyond Doubt Comments

Rating: 4.9

A shimmering of your hair
As I glance in awe
A quiver of your lips
As I swallow in anticipation
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David Taylor
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Fay Slimm 23 September 2008

A great love poem if ever I read one. Well penned.

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Michelle Tiddy 23 April 2007

Lovely poem again David! ! : -)

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Michael Fischer 19 April 2007

Great use of vivid detail and description. Your captured the scene perfectly, painting a beautiful picture of a beautiful woman. That's what makes it memorable for me! Top marks! -Michael

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Marci Made 18 April 2007

Tastefully sensual, beautifully written of what appears to be a passionate love. Hot! A fortunate wife have you~~~~~~~~~~mm.

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Ernestine Northover 18 April 2007

Undoubtedly a excellent write. I like your style. Great read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Lynda Robson 18 April 2007

Lovely poem David, full of anticipation, a 10 for this, Lynda x

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David Taylor

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