Thursday, January 10, 2008

Beautiful Babii Comments

Rating: 3.5

I only realized how much I love you
It pains my heart to know I left you
When you said you love me
Tears rolled down my cheek
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Blue Eyes 24 November 2008

when u said u love me tears rollled down my cheek i love the image of tears trying to come out though u r stopping them but they roll down anyway very romantic.i love it.a 10 from me.

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i am Buterflyluv 10 January 2008

It was a nice poem, but it didn't flow, there was no continuity

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