Friday, September 11, 2009

Beautiful Angel Comments

Rating: 4.7

The sun was shining bright and my eyes were refusing to see the light,
I opened my eyes like an half opened nut shell,
As i walked i tripped an fell,
Then i opened my eyes as wide as a sea,
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

Wonderful, so beautiful.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 May 2010

i refused to see the light... was your angel only a reflection? ? ß dont you believe that angels can come and really appear before you. i do believe it. thank yu for sharing..

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

WoW...never heard of such angel before. :)

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Obinna Eruchie 03 November 2009

For a moment, the reflection of yourself was that of a beautiful angel, and you questioned the angel without knowing it was you, 'why did god send you'. Cute and sweet!

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Kee Thampi 13 October 2009

hope all the hopes are dream you seemed to write on it Then i opened my eyes as wide as a sea, And saw an angel in front of me, As i was talking i noticed the lips of the angel was moving as wel. i asked the angel, why did god send you

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i li your poem its beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! :)

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 September 2009

Simply beautiful and adorable.

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Annabel Sheila 15 September 2009

Lovely write! ! Anna

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2009

As i was talking i noticed the lips of the angel was moving as wel. i asked the angel, why did god send you There was no anwer and i finally realised it was my reflection it is true reflection or urself if u have clear heart and honest interntions... see your self in mirror you will find your true friend in you....good write... i liked it most....10 read mine anywhere.... mary to marry... butterflies around(inall 301 poems for u to read)

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Broken Heart 14 September 2009

great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Supriya Prathapan 14 September 2009

'We should like ourselves' I think this is the message you are trying to convey through your poem. Well written

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Manjula Arumuga Nainar 14 September 2009

dear You love yourself so much..........de got a view to think ourself as an angel

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

beautiful poem! each one is a gift of god, we should value our own self.. nice

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 September 2009

passionate flow from heart within by the shadow of dream, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Shekhar Joshi 11 September 2009

beautiful poem........well i could imagine myself in your situation...... very well done.......liked it.......... ;)

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 September 2009

Wow. How imaginative. Nice figuratives!

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