Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Beautiful And Tormented Comments

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He lives in his dreams
They are less painful than reality
He’s been through more hell than anyone should know
And yet, he’s more beautiful than any she’s known
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Guarded Heart
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Ruby Root 19 July 2006

Hi Guarded Heart, I don't believe there is any type of love out there. I am sorry but I think people take people for granted. It is always nice at the beginning and then it ends up terrible. I just think we live in unrealistic world. I don't believe anyone can love that much, sorry. Your poem was great. Great imagery and emotions. Take care.

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The Sleeper 19 July 2006

Last line has me pondering, but all in all its excellent, Maybe neither one of you are outspoken as you claim to be? .... Love doll

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