Beautiful Comments

Nicely penned. Keep writing

Gods ways are not our ways. Nice poem

Ugly turned into beauty. Nicely woven. But the flip side ‘ugly-beauty’ expecting form you next time. And ten dr. sakti

Interesting poem! God knows what we deserve.

God will not give us what we hope but He gave us what we need......................yet it is most beautiful as u blaze the glory of God, yes God bestow on what we really deserve but not what we desire, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

beatiful is beautiful is jus a matter of percepcion

a very good begin.Keep on writting

Wow! such an ammazing poem, nicely written too, keep the good work =)

Very beautiful Etrodinarily written I love the exqusite use of sights You are A very lovely poet Keep going for it lol.........100000++++

Beautifuly expressed, I wish you all the best!

yes you ar right God is god all the time thanks for sharing God bless you sister luwi

so very true....god does things in strange ways......but his gifts will always turn out for the better....well said :) ......an excellent first poem: D 10++

Nice n excellent my dear. The reality of idaeas u hav i pleased. Plz read my poems also n coments. Thx

sweetly put and i hope you continue on your journey admiring what is before you... gaining what you long for.....

This is a very interesting twist. Our shortsightedness versus the wisdom of heavens. Good work.

very beautiful... GOD bless the sinners and he forgive all of those GOD brings famine but with a purpose..grace

Beautifully written 10s keep it up

Dear Mel If everything sumptuously from the beginning then what for the remaining life? You are telling the truth and the way it should be. Good writing too, especially as a beginner, it is very good. We expect more from you. Noor

Beautiful thoughts. Keep writing, Mel. Best Wishes Naseer

Well, it's not bad at all, for a first piece.Quite a beautiful mind.Keep writing Mel.