What night was given in beautiful trust
Engulfed with kisses, touching and lust
Your mouth so strong, and filled with passion
Devouring my body in pleasing fashion
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Now you have my heart and soul in your hands My mind and body, willing to meet demands Thank you, thank you so very, very much All loving actions of your body, have the healing touch This life I am yours to do as you ask.. very passionate and full of love and engulfed in lovely satisfaction . thank you for this love poem. tony
The piece is absolutely marvellous. A powerful romantic poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned with insight. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
What a great love! ! ~~So passionate and beautiful poem.10 Thanks for your comment Deborah :)
This took my breath away Deborah - - just beautiful........10 + + + Fay
the words emitted the meanings has great impact on the reader! beautiful! ! 10+
Sounds to me the embrace of you and your love happened on a magic carpet like the poem itself..........luvli poem nice feelings+++++++10 regards uavaniceday
Beautiful as the title implies, it is passionately expressed and it does remind me of 'A Sensual Kiss' (my poem) .
A beautiful and passionate poem written in tribute to someone you love. ! 0+
Stunningly...beautiful! I like how you used your words to build up to the 'climax'... very a propos :)
A deeply passionate poem Deborah, both beautiful and sensual. Best wishes, Andrew
full of physics and chemistry full of romance your tapestry your poems make a young heart dance you are the teacher of ROMANCE
full of passioante physics and chemsitry.........you are a teacher of eternal romance
This is a very steamy, romantic write. Artistically done and enjoyable! : -)
I loved this one, very well written.