Thursday, June 4, 2009

Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.6

What night was given in beautiful trust
Engulfed with kisses, touching and lust
Your mouth so strong, and filled with passion
Devouring my body in pleasing fashion
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Deborah Cromer
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Andrew Blakemore 24 October 2019

I loved this one, very well written.

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Sensuous par excellence...love poem ultimate

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Beautiful verse...... Blue blood you have

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

Now you have my heart and soul in your hands My mind and body, willing to meet demands Thank you, thank you so very, very much All loving actions of your body, have the healing touch This life I am yours to do as you ask.. very passionate and full of love and engulfed in lovely satisfaction . thank you for this love poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2015

The piece is absolutely marvellous. A powerful romantic poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned with insight. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

What a great love! ! ~~So passionate and beautiful poem.10 Thanks for your comment Deborah :)

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Fay Slimm 21 September 2009

This took my breath away Deborah - - just beautiful........10 + + + Fay

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2009

the words emitted the meanings has great impact on the reader! beautiful! ! 10+

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Ken E Hall 26 August 2009

Sounds to me the embrace of you and your love happened on a magic carpet like the poem itself..........luvli poem nice feelings+++++++10 regards uavaniceday

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Obinna Eruchie 23 August 2009

Beautiful as the title implies, it is passionately expressed and it does remind me of 'A Sensual Kiss' (my poem) .

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Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

Passionate and written with love, well penned 10 Lynda x

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Beker john 19 August 2009

nice poem full of passion 10

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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

A beautiful and passionate poem written in tribute to someone you love. ! 0+

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Danny H 18 August 2009

Hope the love is still going strong :)

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Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Stunningly...beautiful! I like how you used your words to build up to the 'climax'... very a propos :)

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Andrew Blakemore 12 August 2009

A deeply passionate poem Deborah, both beautiful and sensual. Best wishes, Andrew

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Siddharth Singh 20 July 2009

Unconditional surrender to one's lover. Amazing. A sure 10.

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

full of physics and chemistry full of romance your tapestry your poems make a young heart dance you are the teacher of ROMANCE

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

full of passioante physics and chemsitry.........you are a teacher of eternal romance

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Smiley Hooker 09 July 2009

This is a very steamy, romantic write. Artistically done and enjoyable! : -)

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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