Thursday, April 17, 2008

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Wakes at five to head for a run
She does three miles each morn
And dusk, before & after the sun
Till beads of sweat adorn
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Tiffanie Lein
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Tiffany This is very sad, but so many females particularly, try to look like skeletons through their lack of self worth. You explained it so well in this piece. Very well done! Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 29 April 2008

Well structured piece...I think a lot of people will relate to this fine write keep this gift of yours going all the best jon

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Brittany West 29 April 2008

this was great to read many poeple could relate BTW i like your poems hope you keep writing

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Tiffanie Lein

Tiffanie Lein

Vancouver, B.C.
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