Thursday, February 1, 2007

Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.8

Don’t cover your face with your long bangs;
Try to hide your figure with your hands.
Look away when eyes lock into yours
Because you feel
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Grace Tan
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Lily Law 24 September 2008

grace, u are BEAUTIFUL in ur own way... =)

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Aijaz Asif 20 September 2008

very touching poem, great work.... thanks

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

A moving composition with beautiful, love it,10+

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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2008

Everything about this poem is beautiful, stunning piece..10/10 best wishes Jon

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Polar Bear 09 August 2007

thanks for the encouragement, i like your message :)

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Melvina Germain 24 March 2007

Grace, I will mark this poem as one of my favourites, I'm so happy God led me to you this morning. I said these words many times in the past to my most beautiful daughter. She walked with head down, fearful of all around, I didn't give up of course, I encouraged her day after day. I admit though I was a very strict parent and wanted only the best for my daughter and sons, but I know now that I was harder on her than the boys so I contributed to that behaviour. As a very famous man once said ' you do better when you know better'. We worked on this together and she changed tremendously to where she was the exact opposite. She's beautiful, stands with head held high. I'm going to show her this poem, she'll thnk it was written for her. Everything happens for a reason and this morning the good Lord led me to this poem, she needs to see this at this time, it will help to show her again how far she has come. God is good. Thankyou Grace for this inspiring poem. ---Melvina---

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David Harris 09 February 2007

Grace, a beautiful poem that not only lovely ladies can adhere to, but also the males. I have to admit when I was so much younger than today I was a bit shy and felt the way you described in this poem. Great poem. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Ivor Hogg 07 February 2007

If you feel beautiful you are beautiful Young Lady I spent some years in Singapore many years ago and one of my lasting memories is of the many beautiful women I saw of many different races.

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Ames Sunshine 03 February 2007

Wow! i really like this poem. It's so real and down to earth. It took a lot of heart to write this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

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