So the jaws don’t drop
When you walk down the street –
The brakes don’t screech,
And the horns don’t beep…
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This poem is lovely...I think it definatly describes how the world looks at beauty and people now..Everyone is so judgemental, but reading this I can see that you see past outer beauty so good for you! Keep up the great poems! !
look beyond what is seen by the naked eye.then you can see beauty deep within. nice poem.
They say beauty’s only skin deep But we lack X-ray vision lol I liked the whole poem but these lines best. Guess x-ray vision is why some beauties fall in love with the beasts as well.
i like it its very butiful keep going love robin...i even feel bad about my self but look at me now im depressed but ur really good keep it up ur really good.
I did not give this poem a 10 rating because I personally don't like how it flows down the page, it seems to catch in parts and get jumbled on the tongue. However the subject matter is brillaint, I know entirely too many people who don't understand how good they really are.
nicely put....10/10 i think its a poem that should register in the minds of all girls-women but Lord knows a lot of girls would still beg to differ
This was a really interesting poem. i love the flow of this poem its just different. 10+++ -Tyease
This is an amazing poem i really like it alot =D keep it up
A lovely poem. Like it very much. Adeline