In your mouth,
I am precious pearl
Diamond cut
woman
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I love the references here and it clearly create ambience and a romantic atmosphere...just be carefull to bring in references that is unknown to readers that is not well read.....but the skill and creative ability is present with a fusion of intensity...liked this
A nice and well written love poem with Similes to drive home the conviction of the poet. A lovely piece penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.