Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.5

In your mouth,
I am precious pearl
Diamond cut
woman
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Karen Touzalin
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Chinedu Dike 29 December 2014

A nice and well written love poem with Similes to drive home the conviction of the poet. A lovely piece penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Martin Lochner 08 February 2011

I love the references here and it clearly create ambience and a romantic atmosphere...just be carefull to bring in references that is unknown to readers that is not well read.....but the skill and creative ability is present with a fusion of intensity...liked this

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Karen Touzalin

Karen Touzalin

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