Beauties Nucleus, Gloria Comments

Ah yes, And Glory be her name! A beautiful tribute to one's life partner. What more could she ask for? Cheers. Subroto

Super tribute my friend More than beautiful poem expressing deep transparent love 10

How lovely! Keep it up :)

A beautiful tribute to a beautiful love Ken. - - wishing you all the happiness your verse sings about - forever....... and warm wishes to your Gloria who inspired it.... from Fay.

So close, yet so far away. The length is perfect. The form and structure are fine. There is only one thing it needs so much to make it one of mine. The only thing to make it sound like music to our ears. Rhythm and rhyme the only things to which the mind adheres. GW62

That is such a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.

You are an artist my friend, for you have painted an exciting image of passionate devotion!

This is a really good poem, great description of your wife's beauty