Beauties And Sins Comments

I`ve said it before and no doubt I`ll say it again, You have the makings of a Great Poet with the Skills to Harvest Prose unseen to most other mortals. Gods Blessings you already have but please include My Own kind regards. Philip

Good write.............................................10s

I cant believe you're only 15 and at the moment im not thinking of how well you write but of what you have experienced that has caused you to see the world this way. i too am a teenager but i lack that thing you have, maybe ive gone through less pain. This one is really good.

You write very well, try getting inspiration from the joy of life, if you look you'll find it lies inside yourself.

quite an amazing write with interesting, disturbing metaphors. you write like a seasoned poet. didn't lose control of your theme. dark poem, well composed Mamta

well written-keep it up