~ Beau John Keats ~ Comments

its par above! ! i really need to read a lot to even comment on this! ! Greattt! ! ! !

This is a great work of art Niv and a great tribute to Keats' suggested treatment for melancholy. That joy and sadness may co exist reigns true in your blue beauty poison blue. A great eye opener!

A noble tribute to the great poet John Keats- Namasthea! ! ! ! !

Very interesting tribute to John Keats -well done.

Great! Keats must be happy from the heaven!

its like ones reading into your own little world liked it very much!

I couldn't really understnd some of our vocabulary. I had to search up some words in my dictionary and on the computer. But overall i think i quite enjoyed your poem. Good Job! You make a fine poet! Keep on Keeping on! -Renee

Many American women could not understand the enormous sexual awareness that you possess. It comes, I would presume, from the repressed nature of your culture's social mores, which heightens both physical and spiritual awareness and response. Though you struggle with English words and syntax, your inner emotion commands the words you choose to relate this awareness and physicality. Very interesting. -Cat

Good one... Good job

this poem gives off the essence that is came strait from your heart. I like it because it makes you think and wonder and it sparks the imagination and i love the imagery. I also like your reference to a blue beauty poison...

i will be frank, i cannot appreciate the poem fully coz i didn't understand it. maybe if you could some sort or background or context, that could help. but i think i felt the mood, very captivating, even though i didn't understand it i was able to read it to the end because of that powerful thing you do to keep the reader glued. butalso lots of colourful diction, lovely

This is a very deep poem that people can relate to and very good use of words! Keep up the good work!

That poem is very interesting.

Hi Niv: Like Ramesh I would like someone to explain this poem line by line, then at that point I just might understand what the heck you're talking about. Sorry to be so dumbfounded, but I just don't get it.

Hi Nivedita.... Read your poem. I think I will understand your poems by and by. To me this poem was a punch in the face. I will read your other poems and see whether I can relate to them.Thanks for your comment on my poem.

I'm sorry, being one of the older set, I don; t understand.You write for the young.

psychadelelic...kliedoscopic... beutiful..... well done cheers

Striking images...brilliant flames flood the page. Great job Niv a 10+++

awesome descriptive imagery, an amazing read

indeed a good poem written with rich imaginery indeed in niveditasque style........... a good write.......