Beats Me Comments

Bryan, well done...I like the knife imagery and especially 'lips that were once home to me' ah, forelonging, always a good muse. (Just wanted to correct a common spelling mistake (hope u don't mind) Your a thief, should read You're a thief (You are) Keep writing, as you get older, more pain will follow (hopefully joy too) but the pain will help you write more...(Bukowski is my fave poet too)

i like the word play and the rhythm. betrayal expressed beautifully!

very well-written poem, you can really express yourself. good job.