Saturday, July 1, 2023

Beating The Heat In These Hills...[ Anais Vionet Thinks I Should Shorten My Titles For Better Marketing ] Comments

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I took a walk earlier, to avoid the increasing heat and I expected sweat.
And I DID sweat and I'm STILL sweating as I sit at my wife's PC table.
AND it feels like lightweight insects are wandering across my bare skin,
perhaps some mosquitoes hoping the sweat will help each proboscis in.**
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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) In response to 'my reasonable requests', STACY SAID: 'Ok, Buster, then WE WILL BE SURE NONE OF YOUR LIGHTS WILL FLICKER, AND WE SURE WON'T BOTHER YOU AGAIN! ' & 'WE SHALL CANCEL YOUR ACCOUNTS WITH US'. Goddbye & good riddance.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

(cont.) I told Stacy to 'STOP BOTHERING ME! ! ! '...and I told her 'WE DON'T WANT ANY FLICKERING LIGHTS IN THE FUTURE! ' (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

Readers, I emailed this poem to our electric company on Sunday. They called me Monday ('Stacy') . She told me that my poem had been 'enjoyed' and asked it we had any fallen trees or branches in our immediate area. (cont.)

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M. Asim Nehal 02 July 2023

Bri, think I shall ****...... be quite fine. Usage of **** and..... are bit confusing though I could guess them correctly but THESE 'Between the lines' creates suspense and Suspicion, don't they? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

How do I KNOW? HA HA. I'm not even understanding/following you well, I think. bri

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M. Asim Nehal 02 July 2023

Tough to deal with storms, Good to know that it it arrived and departed without causing significant harm, One can comprehend the severity of it even after 23 years the recollection of it is still vivid.

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

Asim, .............Now I AM confused! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Anais' 'poems' are more college-girl-documantary types. 'Poetry Hound' is, I believe, not active now, but, FOR INTERESTING & (to me) QUITE HUMOROUS reading, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND his PH 'biography'.

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Sheeya Hacks, Denish Aloo, Jayne Louise Davies, Kim Barnery, Cowboy Ron Williams, and James McLain [James' recent poems] are poets I recommend. They all seem 'active' now on PH. Anais Vionet aka anais vionet I like.

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Bri Edwards 02 July 2023

Sheeya Hacks, Denish Aloo, Jayne Louise Davies, Kim Barnery, Cowboy Ron Williams, and James McLain are poets I recommend. They all seem 'active' now on PH. Anais Vionet aka anais vionet I like. Her 'poems' are more college-documantary types.

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M. Asim Nehal 02 July 2023

Very well written poem Brian, I enjoyed reading it. I was wondering why you used proboscis instead of many other words but you clarified it in later part. There is one Typo or ERROR In your POET's NOTE Your are Talking about 1 July,2000 and not 2023

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