As I rise
through the ashes of life
I open my eyes
ready to fight
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We have to wage an eternal battle to subdue negativity...! Bitter experiences tend to make us pessimistic.... but through fighting spirit and indefatigable will, we have to overpower our enemy and become positive! A fine write! !
power of positivity - great feeling, I like it. Please read my new poems and comment.
That attitude should carry you far. The power of positive thinking, well defined is this brief and to the point write.Positively great
Positive feeling brings success. Beautiful lines of verse. Thank you.
, , , positivity has an amazing power, , , , , so does your poem, , powerful write, , ,
A great message here Dave - it is all too easy to fall into negativity when life gets tough, and this is an excellent spur to us all that we can rise above it. Well said and well written. Hope your friend takes it on board.
I agree with Valsa ji, though it's not that easy but one can always hope for the best!