Sunday, May 17, 2009

Beatiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't call me ugly
or pretty
or beautiful
and if you think im ugly
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Jessica Caswell
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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Truly expressed the idea in few words. Well done.

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

I agree with Alf and Meagan because everyone is beautiful in a different kind of way but it is really not nice to call people ugly.Nice poem.

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Alf Hutchison 19 May 2009

Jessica...beauty flows through your mind and out through the tongue and pen... a lovely write well done... regards Alf

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Meagan Slack 17 May 2009

exactly! ! right on girl! ! !

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

beauty is in every one of us, they just have to look. it is not always what you see in a book. just sit by yourself and think about all the LORD has given us then search your heart and you will find, a beauty so wonderful that you will not be able to hide.

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Kamel kamel 17 May 2009

beauty is innocence.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

now that's a great piece indeed...very true....physical beauty decays..grows old..but real beauty never decays at all...see you......10+++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 May 2009

Believe me it's a beautiful poem. Beauty is in one's eyes, my dear Jessica. Truth is sometimes beautiful and sometimes ugly.Like nakedness is ugly but semi nakedness is beautiful. There is no absolute beauty. Please keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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C. P. Sharma 17 May 2009

You are right. I am reminded of the following lines: In small prportions we just beauties see In small measures life may perfect be CP

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

not ones perfect...that's why god made erasers...to fix our mistakes...that is a wonderfully good poem...

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 May 2009

We all have flaws but that's how we are created - usually we have another outstanding quality and it's a sin not to look for that in another..We are all different and that makes the world we live in interesting- think how boring if we were all Brabie's and Ken! . A good write to ponder on -

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