Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Beathing Heart Comments

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You Lie on me, with your ear to my heart
A heart beat that beats for you
a heart beat that only you can hear
a heart beat that says your name
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Victor Gama Sabbithi
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Charlotte Ambrosia 18 March 2009

It is an absloute shame that you do not write such lovely poems any more. Is there really no one out there you are not inspired to write about? If there is not i do hope you can find it in your heart to love again.

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Darlene Belcher 04 February 2008

its beautiful. who may i ask is this person who does so. (it better not be dorthy) lol

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Interesting, a breathing, beating heart, a heart that beats out its love.

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