Beaten Eggs Comments

Heartbreaking. Sad to think that all over the world there are those who mistreat their family members this way. Well written. Will read more of your poems.

never heard about slam poetry before, , , the way you wrote it was great, , ,

This is really sad.Going through so much in life and still living like a prisoner.Liked it.

I've never heard the term 'Slam Poetry' before. You write well, but this style is not my favourite - maybe it's my loss, but there you go.

This was really good. I like the detail in the story. Very different. Great play on words. ;)