Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Beaten Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see this girl
beautiful on every way
her face so perfect
her heart almost a full grey
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London Turner
Dad
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Justin Unanue 25 June 2009

I honestly hope that you are not basing this off of yourself.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 June 2009

heart felt and honest piece to share, on a topic most would not cover...you have done this well....fine write

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i understand read my poem 'they look at dad' great poem 110% Unique

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London Turner

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