Monday, June 20, 2016

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I wandered for so many days,
without words to say,
only the great man keep me konwing that's not a reason,
we can find where the answer is,
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Franba Ciscon Ampermou
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Franba. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Augustus Billy Mutebesi 07 August 2016

I like it! It is as confusing as a poem should be!

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Augustus Billy Mutebesi 07 August 2016

Hehee... Interesting poem you have there!

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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2016

Some rough spots with the English but a nice poem, Ciscon

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