Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Beat By A Rumour And Decieved By A Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

I tell myself Im okay while I paste on my smile.
I can forgive but forgetting takes a while.
Your words hurt me they cut to my soul.
I said I wouldnt cry or lose control.
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Silence Dogood
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Lacie Hebert 12 September 2013

You are amazing! I have read 23 of your poems & I plan on reading all 340! U are my favorite poet on here by far... I envy your work! Keep it up :)

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Ashley Davis 14 July 2009

yet again you amaze me with your wonderfully writing! You have such a gift i'm glad your using it. this poem relates to so many poeple out there...its touching..great job again! 10!

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Carmen Johnson 22 April 2009

Really good poem.. Really good.. I am going to put it on my favorites.

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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

I can forgive but forgetting takes a while. forgetting may take forever. I told myself i wouldnt fall apart. But still tears streamed down my face. I have done that. My best kept secret and favourite lie. this is another really good poem. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Amanda Ford 26 October 2008

this is so true...... im going through this myself with some people...... after they truely hurt you once, it's never he same again

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Beautiful and touchy poem. Last stanza is very nice. 10 from me.

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