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A wisp of my hair is jury mast knot
with boundless time in each slot.
Touch of this far cry is damn brown
ecletic music i hear is fine drawn.
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A great work Swetha.Well-rhymed, nice word play.Mr.Bob Wynn is right.Nothing is left.Really.
everything within oneself. Well written. thank u for reading and commenting. Try reading some more pls.
Excellent use of words and rhyme; and an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! Top markssss! ! ! !
You know how much i enjoy rhyme? , and i am sure for a fact that the rhyme was dedictated to me :) ha ha ha ha, but with much joy i really acknowledge the rhyme, it has added to the magnÏficent fabrication of this great pen, and the words in each portion of the poem indeed represent the true comfort of expression in as far as harmony is by much concerned, i enjoyed the tender write, .... Very lovely and superb The_African_Son
rhyming is really impressive, but can u tel me the context for better understanding!
A beautiful poem! You're the poet supreme of our pride.Thank you
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7/28/2025 5:15:50 PM # 1.0.0
A little difficult to follow the meanings but best of poems in rhythm and recitation. Nice poem.