Thursday, November 12, 2009

Beast Around Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dedicated to one smart lady

She is worst for the bad
She is best for the good
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Luwi Habte
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John Mcmanus 25 November 2009

I like this one Luwi it's very effective and gets over it's message really well.

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Henry Brown 23 November 2009

Oh what would we men do without you woman. Very descriptive of the typical woman

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Dipy Hermonite 16 November 2009

Thoughts very well articulated. Once again you have shouwn great talent. Keep shining. lol. Dipy

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Alf Hutchison 14 November 2009

Luwi how well you capture the changing faces of woman ... Regards Alf

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed..........................

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John Knight 14 November 2009

Hi Luwi - A lovely poem with a warning to all men - TEN. We have all met precioous ladies! As you say the can be worst - bad - careless - easy & hard. The can also be best - good - caring - kind & brilliant. They are like chameleons and have many moods. The only way to pleasure such ladies is to read their moods! You are not like that LUWI you are always lovely - pleasureable and gentle - we all love you. Love ib Poetry - JOHN

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 November 2009

A fine expression about a flower which is also a knife. Strange but interesting combination. Liked the sincerity in the poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 November 2009

she must be a precious beast! good...a poem of my kind...10

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Carol Gall 14 November 2009

nicely said maybe not so precios? 10

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Lady Grace 14 November 2009

owwww....superlative are well presented dear.... and i think, the figure of speeches are complete...hyperbole, simile, irony, personification, metaphor, onomatopoeia and etc...etc....

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