Wednesday, April 11, 2007

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It lurks.
It drools on the threshold of my mind –
Nameless, heartless beast,
Waiting, ever waiting, for me to take one – step – out.
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Sophia White
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Landrey 11 April 2007

i'm so glad you repeated hopeless three times at the end. a lesser poet would have fallen into something like 'hopeless, helpless, hapless, heartless' so thank you. -landrey

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