Beast Comments

I didn't read it all, a fabulous attempt at a long poem. Have you read the famous poem Marrianna? I forget the name of the poet.

Beauty and the beast is roaring more here, i loved it how you mix the story...you tried to make something new by reborn these works, and it new as new story...keep on coming_SOul

A good mixing of the stories. A bit too long, though!

I was transported I was touched I was moved, How could he leave? And when he found out he was healed and turned a handsome price it was too late. AAAhhhhh a beautiful story in verse, you nailed us there Luci, you got us at your BEAST.

I wonder why people has not seen this magnificent piece and it remains unnoticed. The emotional dilemma of a beast who is trapped between his love for the damsel and the realisation of his ugliness and the fear of rejection is portrayed at the highest. Though the cold death gave a sad ending to this write, still I feel this is a great poem you have concieved. All the best! I vote 10

So beautifully written with such understanding of the beast and yet when she cure's him her own life is taken from her so cruelly! I was on the edge of my seat reading this sublime poem it has everything and the moral of the tale is that nobody get's everything they want in this life! !