Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Bearer Of Light Comments

Rating: 4.6

Farewell! Tang my tears enslaved by thee
Tied swirl in maze aghast
Claimed eyes of blinded men
Hidden neath’ thou bitter breast
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Julian Salvacion
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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

Excellent piece, written from the heart, Well done, Lynda 10

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Min Sia 13 November 2008

Very powerful words! Full of emotion! Only from a poet with wide imagery..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 November 2008

'CHILDREN OF THE LOST' what they used to call.......but despite of all desperados to save the innocent children, new breeds keep coming on to mar the beauty of Earth. Great piece Julian!

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Marilyn Lott 12 November 2008

A very vivid and honest poem, Julian. Well done - a '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Joseph Poewhit 12 November 2008

We must bear the light for the kids - AIDS, DRUGS, KIDDIE PORN, CRIME, etc.

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