Friday, October 17, 2008

Bear Comments

Rating: 3.9

I watched him grow from a baby to a boy
from a boy to a man
but as he lay there as if he was a sleep
so peacefully
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Bill Thomas 30 January 2009

Such a loss, Crystal, such pain for the family - you convey it very well indeed.

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Silence Dogood 12 November 2008

Lovely description ur lines are very well written

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 10 November 2008

In my opinion the key line is the following: 'He took a little bit of everyone's in my family'. Poetry's power that succeeds in expressing some things otherwise long to explain.

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Heather Hill 07 November 2008

aww thats sad...this is a very good one liked it! Pets always bring joy to someone...no matter how long you've had it...understand it!

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Saint Cynosure 03 November 2008

You express the connection to the pet very well...Pets are part of the family and their loss is felt on much the same level and and many things in life some memories are sweet and some tragic... Very good job! ! !

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