Sunday, January 1, 2006

Beamed Back Comments

Rating: 4.2

I woke with just a twinge of shame
your face had smiled inside a frame
at me, your Mona Lisa eyes
were young and fresh and, oh so wise.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 02 January 2006

Very beautifully written...I loved the romantic feel :)

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Ernestine Northover 02 January 2006

This flowed beautifully, all the weay through, not one word out of place. Just lovely. Thanks a lot. Love Ernestine XXX

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Linda Jenkinson 01 January 2006

delightful herbert...as always...regards linda

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