Every day at the end of my prayers
I make a bowl of my palms and hold it before thee
For a splendid gift without being asked
Your Godly jest surpasses my wit
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An excellent excellent poem with precise ending. Loved this highly expressive poem...top score and to my favorite.
A powerful and wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Not everything that is handed to us is pure gold. We must make efforts to distinguish those that are beneficial to us. A well crafted poem with great images. To my Poem List.
Yes, somewhere in our mangled prayers we thread the bead of hope!
on the holy heart the bead or rosary engraves mystically the shining as the bead of gold o it from throne of God it from the highest heaven for true human
You are a seeker after true worth! God puts grains of sand in the bowl of your hands. Among them, he also puts grains of gold. But to sieve them out requires individual effort too and that is what He expects us to do. Nothing is gained without individual initiative. However be assured that you will be able to obtain the valuable ones, if you persevere. A beautiful short poem!
Thank you Valsa George. God Gives us both pain and joy. We have to strain to achieve real happiness
There's a special beauty and appeal, whenever the poet writes something mystic. His ardent faith in Almighty keeps him on in sieving them again and again, To find a bead of real gold. Brilliant! !
Thank you Leela Kumari the comments that really hail mr to the heights of creative confidence
All with which you fill my bowl Is nothing but beads of bright fake gold.....I profusely admire the beauty of poetic expression so sublime so earnest! The undemanding prayer offered to God by a delicate and honest poetic heart is brilliantly reflected in this fabulous poem! A great piece of poetry!
Thank you Dillip for the unreserved sincere comments that fill my heart with profound feelings
Good poem. NO need to ask anything to God.He will give what we deserve
If the prayer is true God will surely fill your bowl with beads of gold.
Shows the concept of devotion to god, and spirituality at a level which is not generally discussed.
Thank you very much Devi Krishnakumar. To identify the real and the fake is possible by prayers only
Thank you very much Chithra. Read and evaluate my poems please
In day-to-day life people pray to God to give them something which is different from those given to others. But God gives what man deserves. Unknowingly about his entitlement man continues his prayers and keeps on searching for a novel boon!
This witty poem is loaded with wisdom....appreciated! Top score.