Sunday, September 16, 2018

Beads Of Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every day at the end of my prayers
I make a bowl of my palms and hold it before thee
For a splendid gift without being asked
Your Godly jest surpasses my wit
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2023

This witty poem is loaded with wisdom....appreciated! Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2022

An excellent excellent poem with precise ending. Loved this highly expressive poem...top score and to my favorite.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 November 2021

A powerful and wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Not everything that is handed to us is pure gold. We must make efforts to distinguish those that are beneficial to us. A well crafted poem with great images. To my Poem List.

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Captain Cur 08 April 2021

Yes, somewhere in our mangled prayers we thread the bead of hope!

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 December 2019

on the holy heart the bead or rosary engraves mystically the shining as the bead of gold o it from throne of God it from the highest heaven for true human

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Thank you dear poet for the quote

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Valsa George 07 April 2019

You are a seeker after true worth! God puts grains of sand in the bowl of your hands. Among them, he also puts grains of gold. But to sieve them out requires individual effort too and that is what He expects us to do. Nothing is gained without individual initiative. However be assured that you will be able to obtain the valuable ones, if you persevere. A beautiful short poem!

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Thank you Valsa George. God Gives us both pain and joy. We have to strain to achieve real happiness

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Leela kumari.R 01 January 2019

There's a special beauty and appeal, whenever the poet writes something mystic. His ardent faith in Almighty keeps him on in sieving them again and again, To find a bead of real gold. Brilliant! !

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Thank you Leela Kumari the comments that really hail mr to the heights of creative confidence

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2018

All with which you fill my bowl Is nothing but beads of bright fake gold.....I profusely admire the beauty of poetic expression so sublime so earnest! The undemanding prayer offered to God by a delicate and honest poetic heart is brilliantly reflected in this fabulous poem! A great piece of poetry!

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Thank you Dillip for the unreserved sincere comments that fill my heart with profound feelings

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sreekumar 13 December 2018

Good poem. NO need to ask anything to God.He will give what we deserve

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Hussainanchal 19 November 2018

If the prayer is true God will surely fill your bowl with beads of gold.

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Thank you Hussain, let your words be true

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Gouri B 02 October 2018

Beautifully written. Such deep meaning with such few words

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(DPN) 05 October 2018

Thank you Gowri. Read the other poems too as hour time permits

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Prabha 30 September 2018

Your words show how a true devotee never gives up his faith

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Thank you Prabha for the comments

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ReethaAntony 25 September 2018

A poem with philosophical touch..nice

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Thank you Reetha for your comments

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Dev Jijilal 24 September 2018

Shows the concept of devotion to god, and spirituality at a level which is not generally discussed.

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(DPN) 25 September 2018

Thank you Dev. I wish everybody to have a spiritual aspiration too

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Devi Krishnakumar 20 September 2018

Great job. It depicts Spirituality in a higher level.

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Thank you very much Devi Krishnakumar. To identify the real and the fake is possible by prayers only

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Chithra 17 September 2018

Very nice poem sir

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Thank you very much Chithra. Read and evaluate my poems please

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S.sasidharan 16 September 2018

In day-to-day life people pray to God to give them something which is different from those given to others. But God gives what man deserves. Unknowingly about his entitlement man continues his prayers and keeps on searching for a novel boon!

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