Beads Of Gold Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Beads Of Gold

Rating: 5.0


Every day at the end of my prayers
I make a bowl of my palms and hold it before thee
For a splendid gift without being asked
Your Godly jest surpasses my wit
All with which you fill my bowl
Is nothing but beads of bright fake gold
I spend my time sieving them again and again
To find a bead of real gold

Sunday, September 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mystic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hussainanchal 19 November 2018

If the prayer is true God will surely fill your bowl with beads of gold.

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Thank you Hussain, let your words be true

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Gouri B 02 October 2018

Beautifully written. Such deep meaning with such few words

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(DPN) 05 October 2018

Thank you Gowri. Read the other poems too as hour time permits

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2023

This witty poem is loaded with wisdom....appreciated! Top score.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2022

An excellent excellent poem with precise ending. Loved this highly expressive poem...top score and to my favorite.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 November 2021

A powerful and wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Not everything that is handed to us is pure gold. We must make efforts to distinguish those that are beneficial to us. A well crafted poem with great images. To my Poem List.

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Captain Cur 08 April 2021

Yes, somewhere in our mangled prayers we thread the bead of hope!

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 December 2019

on the holy heart the bead or rosary engraves mystically the shining as the bead of gold o it from throne of God it from the highest heaven for true human

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Thank you dear poet for the quote

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