Beads Of A Broken Necklace Comments

as i can see you are an observant , i never knew a poem could be written about necklace beads.well done Sameer

sameer, I really love it.....I can feel that music through your beautiful poem...10

and i m in trance after reading ur poem................very rhythmical and true to heart

but some beads are so precious that once come out of a broken necklace disappear forever, get out of sight and life.......... besides my feeling poem is beautiful

this is nice to read..expressive..naizz

all i can feel about this piece is beautiful!

You have created a lovely musical piece with the beads of a broken necklace - you definitely have away with words Sameer...10+

But the mind of the owner got stucked. Oh! it is ruined Dear well penned regards Sandhya

You make the words get up and dance, beautiful musical poetry dance..10

that's a lovely necklace of words indeed friend.. you v woven it very well..liked it very much.. thanks for this one..10++ with love \shan

Beautiful poem, no strings to hold you, means a dance of joy, for threadless freedom. Bob Blackwell 10+

a decadence of memories settled in the most respected master piece of reality....wonderful my friend...such a lovely to a dream of Tomorrow’s off dream....thank you for your poem....it is a medicine for those felt empty....a 10 +++

Nice mini movie of broken necklace. The last line is a creative way of describing the end. I like it.

Your broken beads dance to a nostalgic tune. I like the phrase, 'threadless freedom'. Something a bit poignant about this one. Excellent, Sameer. Kind regards, Sandra

youre good with words,10

You have put forward a beautiful poem with these falling beads - unique as usually it portrays a sadness but you see joy - I hear it in the tick, tick dance...

threadless freedom they enjoy. Sameer, you have actually written a poem which appeals to all the senses and finally you lift it above ordinary by writing the last two lines. every thing in this world is sentient- you bring it out beautifully. very perceptive- beads of a broken necklace dance with joy... 10 Mamta

at this young age u ve lot of poetic expressions inside u. like the way u write.keep it up! dr veenaa rai