Beads Of A Broken Necklace Poem by Sameer Ahmed

all i can feel about this piece is beautiful!

You have created a lovely musical piece with the beads of a broken necklace - you definitely have away with words Sameer...10+

But the mind of the owner got stucked. Oh! it is ruined Dear well penned regards Sandhya

You make the words get up and dance, beautiful musical poetry dance..10

that's a lovely necklace of words indeed friend.. you v woven it very well..liked it very much.. thanks for this one..10++ with love \shan

as i can see you are an observant , i never knew a poem could be written about necklace beads.well done Sameer

sameer, I really love it.....I can feel that music through your beautiful poem...10

and i m in trance after reading ur poem................very rhythmical and true to heart

but some beads are so precious that once come out of a broken necklace disappear forever, get out of sight and life.......... besides my feeling poem is beautiful

this is nice to read..expressive..naizz