Sunday, July 20, 2008

Beachside Comments

Rating: 4.9

Waves of sadness wash gently upon the sandy

beaches of my soul
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Chinedu Dike 22 August 2019

Deep sad feelings well articulated and nicely penned in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, James.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 April 2013

I've been there. Good write.

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Fay Slimm 19 August 2008

Sadness and despondency personified. Excellent line and rhythm.

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Bob Gibson 06 August 2008

I walk sometimes in this desolate place, in my sight and in my mind

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