Beaches Comments

Lisa, yet another beautiful poem. I like the first stanza. Clever images here. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Watching you sit by the window ledge Waiting for you by the waters edge You travelled the beach On the sand you did sprint Step by step leaving your print Together at last we were never to part the talent and hard work makes the poem, really you are talented and good for writing a poem

Lisa, I like your 'twinkle of water'. I too am a fan of the beach and I love the heady mix of water, sand and sun. Yes the sea certainly has the power to evoke beautiful memories which you show us in this poem. Thanks. love, Alison XXX

Beautiful and timeless your words skipped across the page as ballet to the dancer Beautiful swan on lake Love duncan X

well writen poem, I wish someday I could write poem really good. I like going to hte beach to make foot prints in the sand sooooooooooo cool.